Coffee and a Cupcake by Steven Cross - Short, Romantic Comedy -  When a talented marketing manager eats the best cupcake and drinks the best cup of coffee in the mall she schemes to bring two shop owners together even though they can't stand each other. 31 pages - pdf format

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Hi Steven

I skim read some of this - I don't know why as I don't like Rom-coms lol But I think it's the title that drew me in.  I think it's a great title for a Rom-com (personally I would lose the "a")

As I only skim read it, I don't have much to add other than that I like the premise and I love the Joe character.

Best of luck with it

Matt