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I enjoyed reading your screenplay. The plot twist, where Gina kills her target, is awesome. But when she said, "A bloody Mary," that foreshadows the first ten pages, which is a good trick.
The screenplay overall is good. There are some grammar errors that could be fixed though. Other than that, I have nothing else you can improve on at this point.
I scream, you scream, we all scream for screenplays.
Glad you enjoyed it Reg. I've made over 500 posts in reviews over the last year and can count the number of responses returned on both hands. Twas ever thus . . . All best --
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