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JtF
Posted: February 3rd, 2025, 6:17pm Report to Moderator
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The Unpalatable Truth
Horror / thriller  pdf 91 pages  -- Viewer discretion advised ! --
Nic Kodak gets to grips with the underage girl UK grooming gangs.

Comments suggestions appreciated. Best JtF

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1273 girls await for the justice process to even start in the UK, as TV writer Graham Linehan is arrested by FIVE armed Policemen then taken to a prison cell for a few hurty words on X, as later today Farage speaks to the U.S. Congress' Judiciary Committee . . . .You couldn't make this up. The feature is based on the grooming gang debacle.
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150 floors in 2006?

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NIC
- Shut the fuck up!

Suggestion: NIC swats at the radio, silencing the arrogant voice. “Self-officious prick! Shut the fuck up!”

NIC
Come on then!
What are you waiting for?
Christmas! –

Suggestion: “Jesus Christ on a crutch! What are you waiting for, Christmas?”

On page 3 and 4:
Watch out man!
TEEN 2
You nearly got us.

Nic's side window swishes erratically down.

3.

NIC
(shouting)
Get a job, Hippies!

This sounds unrealistic. I love to talk about dialogue, so here’s my try:

Teen 1: “Hey, man, what the fuck?!?”
Teen 2: “You wanna come back and get some, man??”
Nic, pulling to a stop and sticking head out of window: “Get out of the goddamned road and be happy I’m such a good driver I missed your sorry asses!”
Retracts head into window, mutters, “Fucking punks.”
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