Back to One by David Ragsdale - Drama - As Jimmy (20s) watches his New England factory town and its inhabitants decay, he is consumed by the legacy of his mother and his dreams of another world—one in which he knows he can shine. Will Jimmy have the guts to chase his future? 110 pages - pdf, format 8)

Your title page is not to format, any reader would rightly pass just on that alone. Avoid camera direction and transitions, that is for others to work out. Also the scene numbers are for the shooting script, leave them off, as you have not sold the script yet.