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Posted by: Don, January 6th, 2016, 5:33pm
Allmighty by Vince Remo - Drama, Fantasy - Croix Apollo is a depressed artist who works for a broadcasting company by day and wakes up as God in Heaven, at night. The only catch is he doesn’t know he’s God when awake on Earth. A final battle brews when he develops insomnia and the girl of his dreams, in the form of an innocent soul, is kidnapped by the Devil himself.  119 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: cloroxmartini, January 8th, 2016, 11:02am; Reply: 1
Hi, Vince. If you're around I'll make a couple comments. I think your opening is good but it gets buried in redundant overwriting. Plus 45 is not and old man...just sayin'
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