Posted by: D.A.Banaszak, July 6th, 2023, 6:45pm; Reply: 1
This was completely captivating. Your portrayal of Indian/Kashmiri culture gave the story an air of authenticity. The dialogue was realistic. The characters were deep and believable.
The romance between Adam and Shazana was realistically portrayed. Their feelings for each other jumped off the page just as it would jump from a screen.
I won’t comment on the ending to avoid giving anything away. I know what kind of reaction you were shooting for and, well, you got it out of me.
Nice work.
Posted by: Stoneyscripts, January 7th, 2024, 5:12am; Reply: 2
Thank you Don. That really works. Very much appreciated.
Posted by: ColinS, January 13th, 2024, 3:30pm; Reply: 3
Hey John,
Regarding the Trailer, I kinda think it works as more of an audio visual synopsis which could be quite useful when pitching or querying with the industry.
Hmmm, $20, might be worth giving it go.
Sorry, I hadn't had a to chance to look at the actual script but the trailer is interesting.
Posted by: Stoneyscripts, January 13th, 2024, 5:05pm; Reply: 4
Colin I agree with you. I’ve actually been contacted by a production company called Dojohouse in LA to get this filmed. They love it. It’s too early to gauge what they’re offering but they are well keen to get this screenplay produced. Thanks for your feedback.
Posted by: kcranford, January 13th, 2024, 7:26pm; Reply: 5
John, as I said on another thread here, I think this is awesome. They have created an amazing marketing tool for you and sounds like you already have interest being shown. Wishing you the very best with this. I did post a couple of my scripts (still waiting for them to be posted on the site) and after seeing these trailers, and I will most likely pony up a couple $20s to have the trailers done. Again, great work here. Love the visuals they created.
Posted by: Stoneyscripts, January 14th, 2024, 11:22am; Reply: 6
Thanks KC. Go for it! It’s a no brainer.
Posted by: ColinS, January 17th, 2024, 5:26am; Reply: 7
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I’ve actually been contacted by a production company called Dojohouse in LA to get this filmed. They love it. It’s too early to gauge what they’re offering but they are well keen to get this screenplay produced. Thanks for your feedback.
Wow, good luck!
Posted by: Stoneyscripts, January 21st, 2024, 10:06am; Reply: 8