Super Car Crew by Deano Jones - Series, Drama, Animated - A group of super cars, each with unique super powers, unite to stop a group of super villains from taking over their city. 18 pages - pdf format

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I love this pretty little story with a surprising ending. Only, there is something I miss: Volkswagen!
By the way, I'm currently working on the script for a pilot about two unequal brothers (in the style of "Odd Couple"), but I can't get any further because I don't have the ending. And I should know it as an author, right?

Quoted from Linda24 I love this pretty little story with a surprising ending. Only, there is something I miss: Volkswagen! By the way, I'm currently working on the script for a pilot about two unequal brothers (in the style of "Odd Couple"), but I can't get any further because I don't have the ending. And I should know it as an author, right?

I find knowing how it all ends is very helpful.  :D

This was so cool! It was very well written for its intended audience. I am a huge Red Rover fan. I can't wait until I can get one in my McDonald's Happy Meal.

Quoted from Linda24 By the way, I'm currently working on the script for a pilot about two unequal brothers (in the style of "Odd Couple"), but I can't get any further because I don't have the ending. And I should know it as an author, right?

I almost always start with the ending and then bang my head until I figure out how to get there.