Conspiracy Yoga by Simon Parker - Short, Comedy - What if conspiracy theorist Alex Jones ran a yoga class? 5 pages - pdf format

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A fun little read. Political satire maybe?

A few technical issues but nothing I can add that would benefit the narrative.

Enjoyable but not thought provoking.

Thanks for sharing.

Sorry. It was hard to read and without resolution of any kind.

To be honest, Simon, is this an "ordinary" yoga course ?

What I thought was the fact that this ain't yoga, but this ain't House of Cards.

Anyway, you're quite right, any forms of entertainment such as television could be source of propaganda for a larger conspiracy made by the government, could a benchmark for an upcoming mayor electing campaign, and the yoga got some juice in it.

Overall, keep rockin', pretty nice screenplay in case you're concerning about a conspiracy.

Keep up the good work, Simon