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Posted by: Don, December 22nd, 2023, 12:31pm

Cleaning Ladies by James Austin Mccormick - Short, Dramedy - A crime boss calls together her old team of contract killers for one last job but finds her “cleaning ladies” less than enthusiastic, especially when they learn who the target is. 6 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: Shakespeare on Toast, December 22nd, 2023, 2:23pm; Reply: 1

Hi James. I gave this a read and felt that you didnďż˝t supply enough fuel to the premise. Iďż˝m sure thereďż˝s more to this story than youďż˝ve provided so Iďż˝ll leave it there for now. Thanks for sharing.

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