The Effects of Losing You by María Elena González - Drama - When a middle-aged woman's loving husband suddenly dies, she must navigate the overwhelming challenges of this imposed widowhood in order to survive it. 111 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice :)

I enjoyed your story, it seemed realistic, and the ending can be summed up in one word, family. I wasn't sure what flan was until I saw a photo of it, looks tasty.

Close call with Kevin, I think he needed total accountability. Stella was completely lost.

I'm not much on profanity, and I'm sure some would disagree with me, but most execs frown on that.

I did visualize the locations, especially in France and came to a peaceful conclusion with the main characters.

Keep on writing!

Frank J Dellipoala  

Maria, are you around for feedback?

First thing you must do is take out all the coloured font. It appears it's there randomly and is not standard for Spec screenplays.

Happy to offer more comments so hopefully you'll appear.