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Posted by: Don, February 11th, 2024, 3:12pm
Peach by ShaDon Manigault - Drama - A father defends and protects his daughter when she is accused of a murder. The case begins to take a toll on him as he fights to protect the only living member of his family. 95 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: 143, February 15th, 2024, 10:07pm; Reply: 1
Wow - that was a very engaging story and very well told, ShaDon. It was like the origin story of the Fatal Attraction type character, Peach, but from the perspective of her manipulated and heartbroken father. I was very drawn into the characters and the story and eager to find out what had happened to the mom and baby.  I wonder whatever happened to Destiny/Peach to make her such a psychopath? Or was it was just her "Destiny"??   The court case part was great - we hear Destiny's side of it first then very dramatically Malik's testimony which begins to show Destiny's true nature. Very impressive and a great read. I"m sure it will be an even better film!
Posted by: ShaDonManigault, February 26th, 2024, 8:43am; Reply: 2
Thank you for taking the time to read my latest screenplay! I really appreciate all of the comments! If you have any scripts yourself let me know. I will be more than happy to read them!
Posted by: 143, March 17th, 2024, 10:31pm; Reply: 3
You're welcome!
I have a drama script posted called EarthLife: Most Basic Training if you do have the time and want to read/comment. Very nice of you to offer - thanks : )
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