Whatever Happened to Amanda?

Posted by: Don, March 17th, 2024, 10:09am

Whatever Happened to Amanda? by Dean Hodsfry - Short, Thriller - This thriller is about Amanda who is a wannabe writer however certain things happen that prevents her from becoming a writer. 6 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: LC, March 17th, 2024, 6:23pm; Reply: 1

Hi Dean,

I'm happy to give you some feedback if you're around...

Posted by: Stoneyscripts, March 27th, 2024, 3:13pm; Reply: 2

Hi Dean

My thoughts...

A really cool little story, but I'm still not sure why or how she she died exactly, unless this was all imaginary and she and Francis didn't even exist in the first place?

If I was watching this on screen I don't think I''d be any the wiser.

Whatever happened to her? Lol.

I get that she died writing her manuscript, but what and why she died is what I really want too know. Somebody help me out here.

I confess I am a little slow at absorbing these spiritual narratives.

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