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Posted by: Don, March 24th, 2024, 7:27am
Small Detail by Simon Parker - Short, Drama, Thriller - In a race against time, strangers trapped in an elevator must uncover the bomber among them before it's too late, as tensions rise and secrets unravel in this claustrophobic thriller. 6 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: kcranford, March 25th, 2024, 3:30pm; Reply: 1
Oh wow, Simon. I did not see that coming! Nicely written script with just the right amount of suspenseful build up to the shocker at the end. Nice work with this one.
Posted by: LC, March 25th, 2024, 4:44pm; Reply: 2
Saw it coming myself, and wanted more of an ending.
Logline's a bit deceptive too. None of them are aware there's a bomb at all.
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