The First Bout by Caden Wesson - Short, Drama - A young boxer experiences his first underground fight. 4 pages - pdf format

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Hey! Caden! Hope you're on the discussion board.

The story is pretty much by the books—it has all the tropes of a boxing movie. However, the ending is anticlimactic. So, there is nothing much that I could point out.

There are some typos that I spotted.

Don't forgot the basics. - forget.

This ain't no redneck backyard fight like your used too. - you're.

Good luck.