Dark Snow by Ronald V. Micci - Short, Drama - A sexually repressed woman in her 30s overcomes her inhibitions when she meets a man at an office Christmas party, then races north to her maiden aunt's cabin in the woods to share the joyous news, only to encounter bitterness and jealousy and a poignant parting of the ways.  17 pages - pdf format

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Hi and thanks for sharing you screen short with us. Your writing style is very good and I enjoyed the narrative even though it ended a little too prematurely for me. The very fact that Sandra goes to tell her aunty of her joy I felt the exchange too short and sweet. I would have liked more to engage with Aunties despair and Sandra’s excitement. But still a well written piece which I’m sure is part of something more substantial. Thanks.