Hopefuls by Ronald V. Micci - Series, Comedy, Sitcom - Comedic misadventures of a bunch of aspiring actors in a Hollywood boarding house, run by a retired, elderly British music hall husband and wife dance team. 43 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Ronald, try this below, and repost.
https://www.trelby.org/

Description/action lines should not be uppercase.

Dialogue should not be double-spaced.

(OFF A
HOSTILE LOOK)
Parentheticals should be formatted lower case and not left justified or Capped.

You need proper screenwriting software.

There's some humour here but it's very hard to read.