We loved Polly as well lol.

Whenever we start the rewrite, we’ll keep your notes as well as the others in mind.

Thanks again
Gabe

The initial quarter to half of the script is engaging, humorous, and demonstrates excellent writing. The characters are distinct with witty dialogue, and the story flows well. I really enjoyed reading the dialogue. This screenplay offers a creative and amusing approach to the slasher genre that horror fans will enjoy. While the connection to the logline isn't immediately apparent, it becomes clearer as the story develops, revealing a comedy-leaning narrative within the horror context. One suggestion is to create a more unique costume for the killers rather than relying on the conventional black attire and ski mask, although it remains functional within the slasher genre. Additionally, incorporating more horror elements would enhance the narrative, as the engaging and well-executed kill sequences become a highlight when the slasher elements come into play. Overall, despite the need for further integration of horror elements, the script shows promise and encourages further reading to explore the story's development. And I agree with the others that I really like Polly. The dynamic between Dan and Polly is entertaining, and expanding Polly's character beyond a minor role would be beneficial.

Hey Ktudor1

Thanks for the read. Apologies for taking too long to respond. I informed my co-writer about your review. We’ll consider it when we do the next rewrite. We were going for more comedy than horro but may add more horror in order to illicit more comedy especially from Dan lol. Let me know if you need a read.

Thanks again
Gabe