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Arundel |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 11:12am |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
IT'S ALL IN A SONG
Write a 2-5 page script based on a song title. It can be a literal adaptation of the song's meaning or just based on how the song makes you feel or if it triggers a memory or something.
It can even be just a well crafted scene.
Open genre. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 11:30am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
That is probably the shortest description of a OWC challenge I have seen I feel like this part "...or something" is up for a lot of interpretation lol Love the low page count though. Ahhh and now I have just realized your clue in the other thread "Have a little... "Patience" (whistles)" |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 11:32am |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
Same rules apply as all other OWCs. |
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Zack |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 11:51am |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4504 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
I love this! Gonna start brainstorming now! |
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PKCardinal |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 1:02pm |
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LocationKansas Posts1448 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Wow. That is WIDE open. Cool. Haven't had one that would generate such varied scripts in a long time. Love it.
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SAC |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 1:17pm |
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LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
Agreed on all counts! Like this one a lot.
When are scripts due? |
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Zack |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 1:25pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4504 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
An idea just struck me!!! |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 2:00pm |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
Scripts will be due Friday the 8th by midnight EST. Submit anonymously, as usual. Glad to hear that people seem to like this so far. |
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Zack |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 2:08pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4504 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
That 2-5 page limit is brutal. Lol. But I suppose it wouldn't be fun if it were easy. |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 2:29pm |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
That 2-5 page limit is brutal. Lol. But I suppose it wouldn't be fun if it were easy. |
You can always expand on it later. |
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Nomad |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 3:22pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts721 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
Cool.
This kind of feels like an old Movie Poet challenge. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: September 1st, 2023, 4:55pm |
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Posted: September 1st, 2023, 5:09pm |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 2nd, 2023, 12:25am |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
Yes, it can have a cliffhanger as an ending.
Based on the song title or inspired by is the main idea. I would just say not to quote the song or the lyrics just like you shouldn't in any other screenplay.
Finally, the idea is that the song title should also be the title of the script. |
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kcranford |
Posted: September 2nd, 2023, 2:00pm |
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“What Should I Do?” “I Love Rock n Roll” but...”I’m A Little More Country Than That”. “I Have Nothing” but I do have “High Hopes” that “I’ll Think Of Something”. Feeling “Sorry” for myself. So I might as well go on down to “Margaritaville” because “It’s Five O’Clock Somewhere” and “Tears In My Beer” is better than “Nothing In My Head", but “Tomorrow’s Another Day”. “I Hope You Understand”. “Sincerely”, “Your Truly” P.S. Sorry, “I Couldn’t Help Myself” |
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LC |
Posted: September 2nd, 2023, 5:58pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7644 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Haha! I 'm thinking this might be right up your alley, Kathy.
I miss the chat around here... What's everybody thinking of this challenge? Who's in?
God, there are so many song possibilities. |
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steven8 |
Posted: September 2nd, 2023, 9:44pm |
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LocationBarberton, OH Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
“What Should I Do?” “I Love Rock n Roll” but...”I’m A Little More Country Than That”. “I Have Nothing” but I do have “High Hopes” that “I’ll Think Of Something”. Feeling “Sorry” for myself. So I might as well go on down to “Margaritaville” because “It’s Five O’Clock Somewhere” and “Tears In My Beer” is better than “Nothing In My Head", but “Tomorrow’s Another Day”. “I Hope You Understand”. “Sincerely”, “Your Truly” P.S. Sorry, “I Couldn’t Help Myself” |
I laughed so hard I had "Tears on My Pillow." |
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Zombie Sean |
Posted: September 3rd, 2023, 7:44am |
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LocationColorado Posts1547 Posts Per Day 0.23 |
I'm thinking of entering. Already wrote the script but not sure how I feel about it. I've had the idea for the longest time about this specific song and now's my opportunity, I suppose.
Stay Spooked!
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 3rd, 2023, 10:39am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Haha! I 'm thinking this might be right up your alley, Kathy.
I miss the chat around here... What's everybody thinking of this challenge? Who's in?
God, there are so many song possibilities. |
Love the challenge. Not restrictive but picking a song is giving some great inspiration to write. Really like the low page count as well. If work is not too busy this week, I should be in |
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steven8 |
Posted: September 3rd, 2023, 10:53am |
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LocationBarberton, OH Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
Submitted mine last night. |
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LC |
Posted: September 3rd, 2023, 6:22pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7644 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Steven's out of the gate, fast as usual. Sean too. The hard part's done, so, yes you must! Matt's a time permitting. So many songs to chose from... Song-writers are for the most part a gloomy lot (cathartic) I've discovered. Oh, the heartbreak. |
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AlsoBen |
Posted: September 3rd, 2023, 6:28pm |
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LocationAustralia Posts728 Posts Per Day 0.16 |
I won’t have time for this one with work and everything, and I don’t want to half-ass it like I did in August by writing something in the last two hours of the challenge. Hope everyone has fun |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 4th, 2023, 8:18am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
First draft is done. Looks like I'm in |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 4th, 2023, 9:21am |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
First draft is done. Looks like I'm in |
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kcranford |
Posted: September 5th, 2023, 5:51pm |
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Because the silence on this thread is deafening and Libby and I don’t like that, I am forced to say “I’m In” (Keith Urban). Because I “Can’t Help Myself” (Four Tops) so “Get On Board” (Kevin Simon) the “Party Train” (The Gap Band). “Don’t Make Me Hurt You” (Young Buck). “I’ll Be Back” (The Beatles) if y’all don’t “Respond” (Travis Green). |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: September 5th, 2023, 6:03pm |
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LocationUK Posts4324 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
I'm currently lost in a hole of a million song titles, sure one will resonate eventually...
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ghost and_ghostie gal |
Posted: September 5th, 2023, 6:18pm |
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LocationA helluva long way from LA Posts1566 Posts Per Day 0.29 |
Because the silence on this thread is deafening and Libby and I don’t like that, I am forced to say “I’m In” (Keith Urban). Because I “Can’t Help Myself” (Four Tops) so “Get On Board” (Kevin Simon) the “Party Train” (The Gap Band). “Don’t Make Me Hurt You” (Young Buck). “I’ll Be Back” (The Beatles) if y’all don’t “Respond” (Travis Green). |
Haha! Luv your taste in music, Kathy. Late to the party, who knows, maybe we'll come up with one. _ghostie gal |
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LC |
Posted: September 5th, 2023, 8:37pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7644 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Ditto to that (re Kathy's comment). And Ant, same here. So many songs, so little time. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 6th, 2023, 4:15am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
I can't decide on the ending... I've rewritten it 5 times already. Happy clappy or melancholy? And now I hear other songs and they are calling to me to write about them... |
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Posted: September 6th, 2023, 5:08am |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7644 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Matthew, I do know that sad endings are often a hit with OWC audiences. That said, who doesn't love a happy ending. Sorry, I'm no help really. |
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ghost and_ghostie gal |
Posted: September 6th, 2023, 5:27pm |
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LocationA helluva long way from LA Posts1566 Posts Per Day 0.29 |
Matthew, I do know that sad endings are often a hit with OWC audiences. That said, who doesn't love a happy ending. Sorry, I'm no help really. |
Don't be bamboozled by that, Matt - she's very helpful. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 6th, 2023, 6:23pm |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Matthew, I do know that sad endings are often a hit with OWC audiences. That said, who doesn't love a happy ending. Sorry, I'm no help really. |
If only I could nail the perfect bittersweet ending |
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steven8 |
Posted: September 6th, 2023, 8:13pm |
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LocationBarberton, OH Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
I can't decide on the ending... I've rewritten it 5 times already. Happy clappy or melancholy? And now I hear other songs and they are calling to me to write about them... |
I always go with Smartalecky. That's why you get cups, and I'm always ...in no particular order. Anyway, if they don't feel right to you, then they're not right. Look at it from a different angle. Perhaps neither style is right. |
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Posted: September 6th, 2023, 10:22pm |
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...Anyway, if they don't feel right to you, then they're not right. Look at it from a different angle. Perhaps neither style is right. |
Hmm, yes maybe a grisly death, or end on a cliffhanger. P.S. Steven, they're mugs. |
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Posted: September 7th, 2023, 2:56am |
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P.S. Steven, they're mugs. |
Thanks for pointing that out, LC. Fortunately, in these modern times, I have the interweb to help me find the difference: https://themugglife.com/what-is-the-difference-between-a-mug-and-a-cup/From the site: "As we have established, cups are petite and daintier than mugs, and they come with saucers, unlike mugs which don’t come with saucers." P.S. - Or, they're made of paper. |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 7th, 2023, 3:29am |
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Remember to not put your real name on the title page. We will be rating/reviewing once submissions are in this Friday night. |
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Posted: September 7th, 2023, 5:40am |
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Remember to not put your real name on the title page. We will be rating/reviewing once submissions are in this Friday night. |
I'm guessing a Newb might have done this and you've asked them to resubmit? To all those entering, time to concoct your best stage name. |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 7th, 2023, 5:34pm |
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I'm guessing a Newb might have done this and you've asked them to resubmit? To all those entering, time to concoct your best stage name. |
Nah, it just added it here because I didn't include it in the initial post like all the others do. I know everyone here knows to do that already. |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Turns out this week was actually quite busy with work, shattered windscreens and randomly buying some puppies.
I have submitted whatever it is I have (can't bring myself to call it a script).
Not much activity in here so I hope some are silently crafting entries. |
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Posted: September 8th, 2023, 7:59am |
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Matthew - randomly buying some puppies (plural)?
I gave it (a script) a go this afternoon but realised I had about three pages of establishing characters and set up and two pages left to pack the rest of the story in.
With what I selected it just sadly wasn't going to happen. This was my second go with a different song as inspiration too.
A deceptively simple challenge cause the stories are already there for the taking. ... I also hope the silence means productivity and look forward to reading what you all have. |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Matthew - randomly buying some puppies (plural)?
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Yep... plural |
“Puppy Love” by Donny Osmond 1972. Slam dunk choice |
| Scripts Available: Christmas Joe (Holiday Drama) Every Time It Snows (Holiday Drama) Happy Holi-DNA (Holiday Romance) Let That Pony Run (Family Drama) With Love, From Romance (Holiday Romance) Essex (Historical Drama)
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Matthew Taylor |
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“Puppy Love” by Donny Osmond 1972. Slam dunk choice |
I was thinking more "I hate Dogs" by Hey Taxi |
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Matthew - randomly buying some puppies (plural)?
I gave it (a script) a go this afternoon but realised I had about three pages of establishing characters and set up and two pages left to pack the rest of the story in.
With what I selected it just sadly wasn't going to happen. This was my second go with a different song as inspiration too.
A deceptively simple challenge cause the stories are already there for the taking. ... I also hope the silence means productivity and look forward to reading what you all have. |
Per Arundel, you don't have to pack a story in. I quote:
Quoted Text It can even be just a well crafted scene. |
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Posted: September 8th, 2023, 11:24am |
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I have 5 pages of pure garbage and still need 2 more to finish the story I'm trying to tell. Even then, I've lost all confidence in it. Will try to salvage something today...but, it's not looking good at all.
Thing is...in my head...I like it. But, it just looks horrific on the page. |
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Written and submitted! Glad I got one in. I haven’t written anything iof substance in months. Not that this script actually has substance, but just saying. |
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Posted: September 8th, 2023, 4:24pm |
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I've got this thing surrounded. Looking like I'll be in. |
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Wasn't able to get my script down to 5 pages. Not even close. I may submit it after the challenge. Looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with. |
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Wasn't able to get my script down to 5 pages. Not even close. I may submit it after the challenge. Looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with. |
Pick your favorite 5 and send it in. Laugh at all the notes: "This is too disjointed." |
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Wasn't able to get my script down to 5 pages. Not even close. I may submit it after the challenge. Looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with. |
Just delete every other word. Genre = abstract |
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Ahem. Back from the dead and in.
Most expected comment on my script: Were you on crack when you wrote this? |
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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PKCardinal |
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Ahem. Back from the dead and in.
Most expected comment on my script: Were you on crack when you wrote this? |
GARY!!!! Getting ahead of the pack here...were you? I mean, not that there's anything wrong with it... |
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Submitted.
That was fun, thank you. Oddly destructive to my week. But, fun. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 6:32pm |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Ahem. Back from the dead and in.
Most expected comment on my script: Were you on crack when you wrote this? |
Good to see you, Gary. Anyone else going to be listening to the songs as they read the entries? |
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Two steps to writing a good screenplay: 1) Write a bad one 2) Fix it |
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Abe from LA |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 7:04pm |
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Been Around
LocationDowney, California Posts556 Posts Per Day 0.08 |
Out of available writing time, so I just submitted. This OWC was not as easy as anticipated. I wasted more time trying to find a song. I guess I'm not the only one. The variety of entries should be interesting, if not entertaining. |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 7:35pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1307 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
GARY!!!!
Getting ahead of the pack here...were you? I mean, not that there's anything wrong with it...
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Cannot answer that as I was blackout while writing this script (and after reading it back, it shows) |
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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steven8 |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 7:44pm |
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Old Timer The Ed Wood of Simply Scripts
LocationBarberton, OH Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
Cannot answer that as I was blackout while writing this script (and after reading it back, it shows)
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I thought PK was asking if you were really dead. |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 9:15pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1307 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
I thought PK was asking if you were really dead.
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Can neither confirm nor deny |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 9:42pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1307 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Good to see you, Gary.
Anyone else going to be listening to the songs as they read the entries?
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Thanks Matthew -- and yes, I'll at least be hearing the song in my head as I'm reading. |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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steven8 |
Posted: September 8th, 2023, 11:05pm |
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Old Timer The Ed Wood of Simply Scripts
LocationBarberton, OH Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
Thanks Matthew -- and yes, I'll at least be hearing the song in my head as I'm reading.
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I have purchased a bouncing ball to help me along the reading journey... |
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Arundel |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 4:57am |
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LocationLas Vegas, Nevada Posts265 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
Wasn't able to get my script down to 5 pages. Not even close. I may submit it after the challenge. Looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with. |
I knew someone was going to have that problem lol... Will be interesting to see what the outcome was once you're ready to release it. |
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Don |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 5:39am |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16458 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
The scripts will be posted by midnight, Saturday, September 9th.
- Don |
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SAC |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 8:22am |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
What’s the over/under on scripts submitted? I think it may be a high turnout. Anyone?
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LC |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 8:37am |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7644 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Can't help you there, Steve. I hope it's a good turnout. |
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SAC |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 9:14am |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
Can't help you there, Steve. I hope it's a good turnout. |
I think it’ll be a good turnout. That said, I can see by the comments lots found this difficult, and I think the real key to a good story is cohesiveness with a clear beginning, middle and end. Something I didn’t come up with. But anyone who achieved that then kudos to you. |
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kcranford |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 9:22am |
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New Features: Christmas Joe
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I think it’ll be a good turnout.
That said, I can see by the comments lots found this difficult, and I think the real key to a good story is cohesiveness with a clear beginning, middle and end. Something I didn’t come up with. But anyone who achieved that then kudos to you.
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A five page limit is tough. I found myself going back and slicing dialogue and character development more than once. What was left could be woefully described as “skeletal remains”. Oh well, it is what it is. Shorter does not equate with easier and this OWC is proof. |
| Scripts Available: Christmas Joe (Holiday Drama) Every Time It Snows (Holiday Drama) Happy Holi-DNA (Holiday Romance) Let That Pony Run (Family Drama) With Love, From Romance (Holiday Romance) Essex (Historical Drama)
Shorts: Santuario (OWC Writers' Choice) Death (OWC) Savior (OWC) |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 10:27am |
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A five page limit is tough. I found myself going back and slicing dialogue and character development more than once. What was left could be woefully described as “skeletal remains”. Oh well, it is what it is. Shorter does not equate with easier and this OWC is proof.
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There used to be a place called MoviePoet that ran a comp every month and it was always a five-page limit. Some amazing stories came out of those. |
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LC |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 6:28pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7644 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
A nice sunny Sunday. I'm ready to read! And listen. I'll be judging your song choices too. And seeing if any of you picked my final choice which didn't get off the ground cause of the deadline. |
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steven8 |
Posted: September 9th, 2023, 7:27pm |
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Old Timer The Ed Wood of Simply Scripts
LocationBarberton, OH Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
I think it’ll be a good turnout.
That said, I can see by the comments lots found this difficult, and I think the real key to a good story is cohesiveness with a clear beginning, middle and end. Something I didn’t come up with. But anyone who achieved that then kudos to you.
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Non-Clear endings were approved by Arundel:
Quoted Text Yes, it can have a cliffhanger as an ending. |
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SAC |
Posted: September 10th, 2023, 9:47am |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
Non-Clear endings were approved by Arundel:
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Yea, no, that’s cool. Just saying that, personally, stories that have a clear structure are usually the ones I like best. In this challenge that may have been hard to do, but definitely look forward to seeing what everyone came up with. |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: September 10th, 2023, 11:34am |
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LocationTexas Posts1307 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Yea, no, that’s cool. Just saying that, personally, stories that have a clear structure are usually the ones I like best.
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I can definitely say then that mine will be low on your list! |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: September 10th, 2023, 11:55am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
I can definitely say then that mine will be low on your list!
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Are you doing that SS thing of completely playing down your entry but you’ve actually smashed it out of the park? |
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