Writer,

I  liked how you opened the story.   The writing was on point.  As far as the story, I didn't know what was going to happen.   My only opinion is to look and see if it would benefit to start with her body floating in the ocean as a new scene.    Other than that. Great job.

This was a complicated story that was clear and easy to read. I didn’t know what to expect for an ending. The ending made sense to me but I didn't see it coming.