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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    September '23 OWC  ›  Falling - OWC Moderators: Arundel
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D.A.Banaszak
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This started out rather rough but smoothed out a little after Benny’s and Lola’s conversation got going. I know a lot of people like a twist, which would have been nice here, but it is what it is. You have some nice wise cracks that Groucho Marx would be proud of, and some good scene descriptions to engage my imagination. This was a fun read but I have to admit, it wasn’t much more than that.


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I thought this was great.   You set everything up where it was easy to imagine.  The dialogue was on point.    I thought your characters were unique.    I didn't expect Benny to die.  Lol.   This is one of my favorites.  
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