I love the gag of Death minding his own business and then being startled by a car accident.

Yep, super slick and super funny. Lives up to the title. Sign me up, the world needs more trash like this.

Flashes of brilliance here.  The opening scene is gold.  You've clearly got a voice.

Some of this might well be over-the-top for some, but this will speak volumes to your target audience (even though the spoon-gagging joke feels beyond its expiration date)

This almost never happens, but I'm about 80% sure I know who birthed this monstrosity of a script.

Not bad. Loved the beginning, but less so the ending. Valley girls are so
interchangeable. They were a hoot in the '80s. I definitely liked Death more
that the slutz. With that said, bring back Deborah Foreman and I'm in.

Writer,

I absolutely loved this. Wish I could write this way. Great pacing, loved how they torched that guy in the church! Not much more for me to say here. My favorite so far! Great work, excellent writing!

Steve