Quoted from Dreamscale Zack?  Wow...well done, Brother!  You fooled me for sure. It was a very good entry and you should be proud.  Don't worry about the peeps who trashed it.

Thanks, Dude. Your review honestly made me feel accomplished.

Thought for sure you'd know this one was mine.

Quoted from Zack In all seriousness, though. I'm not ashamed of I wrote, not one bit.

You have no reason to be ashamed.

I'll admit, this wasn't for me. But, then, I'm a naive Kansas boy, happy to stay in my little bubble.

But, I want to say: of all the writer's on here... you know how to commit to something. And, that's a very good thing. It gives you a distinctive voice.

Ha! Called it.

Well, Zack you did better than I did - you wrote and submitted. I wrote and did not submit. So...
Maybe you decide to rewrite. For a satire the tone is not there I’d think but your call.

I did laugh at the fact that your script got a warning for "graphic depictions" and my script featured a child getting shot in the face but got no such warning lol

You be you, Zack. Write the stories you wanna tell

My script had a baby thrown against a tree. Just a simple drama.

Sorry, Zack, but for me, this was pretty light considering the promised content. I suppose that's what hype does sometimes. For me, it raises my expectations then, when they haven't been met, the story becomes loathed.

Mixing comedy didn't help, but neither did the hype full of fake promise. I think with a script like this, you need to go all-in... and avoid 'ow, my dick'.

Quoted from DustinBowcot My script had a baby thrown against a tree. Just a simple drama. Sorry, Zack, but for me, this was pretty light considering the promised content. I suppose that's what hype does sometimes. For me, it raises my expectations then, when they haven't been met, the story becomes loathed. Mixing comedy didn't help, but neither did the hype full of fake promise. I think with a script like this, you need to go all-in... and avoid 'ow, my dick'.

No need to apologise, Dude. Thanks for giving it a chance.

As for the particular line you're mentioning... I was going for a cheap laugh.

Quoted from PKCardinal But, I want to say: of all the writer's on here... you know how to commit to something. And, that's a very good thing. It gives you a distinctive voice.

Thanks, Dude. Means a lot coming from you.