Hey all, thanks for your generous notes, some really useful points made. I will be taking some of these on board when I eventually get round to the feature version, of which I envisage this as the opening. A quick couple of answers/responses if I may. Vocabulary... yep, I do like a good word and may use some that are less familiar, purely personal belief is that occasional use adds to the style of the writing. And I've yet to actually have a producer or director query anything of this type... there's always a balance and maybe 'sigil' tipped it Vikings not really standing a chance, very good point that will be remedied in any future version. Yep. 'they'll be back' should definitely have been 'more will come' Gum, no, not familiar with Sylphs but I'll look them up, tx. Again thanks all for the helpful comments and to Rene for running it and Don for being Don. |