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WT Champion Round Final Results (currently 3243 views) |
Don |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 11:04am |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16834 Posts Per Day 1.92 |
WT Champion Round Final Results Winner: ...Shall Be Infringed by David Lambertson - Short, Drama, Thriller - The story behind the repeal of the second amendment. 18 pages - pdf format Runner Up:Control by Paul Knauer - Short, Thriller - A CIA agent with a questionable past is called in to help his soon-to-be-president wife through an election night threat. 11 pages - pdf format Huge Thank You! to Sean for running this. This was not easy. All the good stuff happened because of Sean. Another Huge Thank You! to everyone who participated and were patient with the numerous technical issues and delays. More on that later. A lot of good scripts came out of this. I encourage everyone who participated to revise his/her work and get them resubmitted. I encourage anyone who has read a script that must get made take a crack at writing a review to feature on the blog. - Don |
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------------- You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take. - Wayne Gretzky
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PKCardinal |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 11:34am |
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LocationKansas Posts1501 Posts Per Day 0.58 |
Many thanks to Don and Sean on a great tourney! Had a blast. Learned a bunch. Pushed myself to try new stuff. Positives all around.
About David... what a guy. I couldn't be more impressed with how he handled himself during the championship writing week. He was supportive and kind... even shared his outline for competitive reasons BEFORE the writing was done. On top of that, he offered (and followed-up) to help make my script the best it could be. Unbelievable.
For all the other writers, thank you for your support and comments. You made this new guy feel like one of the group. I appreciate that very much.
Sorry to Warren and TheUsualSuspects. I didn't quite have enough to slay the elDave beast. He's a force. I'll have to grow stronger, in case I ever face him again!
Best, Paul Goodest Runner Up |
| PaulKWrites.com
Five Must Die - Low budget, contained horror thriller/Feature The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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jayrex |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 11:55am |
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Old Timer Cut to three weeks earlier
LocationLondon, UK Posts1419 Posts Per Day 0.21 |
Congratulations to David! And well done Paul!
It's been a few years since I've taken part, and I enjoyed every moment.
Just hearing what you had to say about David, top man, mightily impressive to hear. Definitely a pillar of the simplyscripts community.
Thank you Don & Sean too, great job. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 12:19pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Thanks first to Sean and Don for all their hard work running this challenge. Super efforts. Thanks to all who took the time to read and comment on all the scripts through all the rounds. You guys are real troopers. Paul wrote a great script – this was a real nail-biter till the end and it could have easily gone the other way -so, many kudos to him. Paul - look forward to your future work. There is a whole bunch of talent there! And...
Quoted Text Best, Paul Goodest Runner Up |
Gave me a great laugh for the morning. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 12:27pm |
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LocationUK Posts4458 Posts Per Day 1.09 |
Congrats to both for getting tot he final and to Dave for taking it down! Some great writing on display in this challenge! |
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PrussianMosby |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 1:08pm |
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Congratulations, Dave,
What a great success to take this deadly tournament home.
Also congrats to Cardinal. Two worthy finalists. |
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CameronD |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 2:10pm |
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Congrats Dave. Throughout the competition it always ended up your scripts were among my most favorite. No offense to myself or anybody else in the brackets, but I don't think this competition was even close. Your work was top notch throughout. Nice accomplishment. And big thanks to Sean, Don and everybody else who participated by writing or voting to make this happen. This was a great experience with some really strict script restrictions to work with. Like a screenwriting reality show. Next year I'll be looking for it again. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 2:23pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Congrats Dave. Throughout the competition it always ended up your scripts were among my most favorite. No offense to myself or anybody else in the brackets, but I don't think this competition was even close. Your work was top notch throughout. Nice accomplishment. And big thanks to Sean, Don and everybody else who participated by writing or voting to make this happen. This was a great experience with some really strict script restrictions to work with. Like a screenwriting reality show. Next year I'll be looking for it again. |
Thanks Cam - that's great to hear |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 2:24pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Congratulations to David! And well done Paul!
It's been a few years since I've taken part, and I enjoyed every moment.
Just hearing what you had to say about David, top man, mightily impressive to hear. Definitely a pillar of the simplyscripts community.
Thank you Don & Sean too, great job. |
Thanks mate |
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khamanna |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 3:01pm |
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It's over! I'm going to miss it. It was a lot of fun - wow, wow, wow, Sean!!! What big crazy ideas you have. Many great scripts came out of it.
And big thanks to Don for doing so much work for the five rounds!
Dave, yey, congrats! I'd bet on you to win this thing from the very first round though.
Paul, congrats to you for finishing the finals with the score, that's very close to Dave's - your work is very impressive. Quite a few of your scripts struck me as exceptional.
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 3:03pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
It's over! I'm going to miss it. It was a lot of fun - wow, wow, wow, Sean!!! What big crazy ideas you have. Many great scripts came out of it.
And big thanks to Don for doing so much work for the five rounds!
Dave, yey, congrats! I'd bet on you to win this thing from the very first round though.
Paul, congrats to you for finishing the finals with the score, that's very close to Dave's - your work is very impressive. Quite a few of your scripts struck me as exceptional.
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Thanks, Kham - appreciated |
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JEStaats |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 3:15pm |
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Old Timer No sh*t, there I was....
LocationTucson, AZ Posts1765 Posts Per Day 0.57 |
Congratulations to Dave and a hardy slap on the back to Paul! Two very solid pieces of work for the final judgement. Voting was close, too.
Sean - Had a blast participating and being judge/jury. Thankfully it wasn't a tie and you didn't have to be the executioner! |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 3:17pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Congratulations to Dave and a hardy slap on the back to Paul! Two very solid pieces of work for the final judgement. Voting was close, too.
Sean - Had a blast participating and being judge/jury. Thankfully it wasn't a tie and you didn't have to be the executioner! |
Thanks, mate |
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PKCardinal |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 3:28pm |
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LocationKansas Posts1501 Posts Per Day 0.58 |
Thanks, Kham. That's high praise, coming from you!
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| PaulKWrites.com
Five Must Die - Low budget, contained horror thriller/Feature The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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PKCardinal |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 3:29pm |
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LocationKansas Posts1501 Posts Per Day 0.58 |
Congratulations, Dave,
What a great success to take this deadly tournament home.
Also congrats to Cardinal. Two worthy finalists. |
Thank you. Your consistent compliments were fuel for writing. |
| PaulKWrites.com
Five Must Die - Low budget, contained horror thriller/Feature The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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Warren |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 4:31pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3890 Posts Per Day 1.23 |
Massive congrats to Paul and Dave. Each of you had some cracking scripts during the tournament.
You gave Dave a hell of run for his money. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 4:45pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Massive congrats to Paul and Dave. Each of you had some cracking scripts during the tournament.
You gave Dave a hell of run for his money. |
Thanks. Paul did indeed |
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MarkItZero |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 5:59pm |
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Congrats, Dave! That was an epic tournament and you conquered all. Paul put up one hell of a fight at the end. You both should be proud.
Huge thanks to Sean. It really was an amazingly smooth run for something new like this. And to Don who secretly has to do an insane amount of work. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 6:06pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Congrats, Dave! That was an epic tournament and you conquered all. Paul put up one hell of a fight at the end. You both should be proud.
Huge thanks to Sean. It really was an amazingly smooth run for something new like this. And to Don who secretly has to do an insane amount of work. |
Thanks James |
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SAC |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 6:53pm |
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Of The Ancients
LocationUpstate NY Posts3357 Posts Per Day 0.77 |
Congrats to both you guys! So much effort was put into this by all the writers, and, of course, Sean and Don. Well done all. |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 7:06pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1305 Posts Per Day 0.30 |
Interesting that one vote going the other way would have resulted in a tie sending Sean into a self-induced coma.
Congrats to Dave for winning the Royal Rumble. Always good to be the last man standing in the ring at the end. Congrats also to Paul, who slugged it out until the end, when Dave pulled out the ole 18 page masterpiece from his trunks and banged on Paul’s head when he wasn’t looking (neither was the ref, who never is).
Excellent work by both writers here as well as many others who didn’t quite make it as far. Expect to see big things in the future from both Paul and Dave and hopefully we’ll see more than a few of these shorts that came out of this contest produced!
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 7:21pm |
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LC |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 7:34pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts8173 Posts Per Day 1.37 |
Oh jeez, Dave's gonna have a big head now. Good on ya, Winner! And good on ya, goodest runner up! ... So, now the March to May madness is out of the way we can look forward to the slightly less fraught and frenetic OWC. |
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FrankM |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 8:31pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1446 Posts Per Day 0.56 |
As one of the Red Shirts who died in the first round just to show that the tournament is serious, I’d like to congratulate both of you for getting past everything that Sean sent your way and turning in a couple excellent examples of screenwriting for an epic final.
And hawkeye, I don’t want to know where Dave was hiding that masterpiece... please don’t explain it. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 8:56pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Interesting that one vote going the other way would have resulted in a tie sending Sean into a self-induced coma.
Congrats to Dave for winning the Royal Rumble. Always good to be the last man standing in the ring at the end. Congrats also to Paul, who slugged it out until the end, when Dave pulled out the ole 18 page masterpiece from his trunks and banged on Paul’s head when he wasn’t looking (neither was the ref, who never is).
Excellent work by both writers here as well as many others who didn’t quite make it as far. Expect to see big things in the future from both Paul and Dave and hopefully we’ll see more than a few of these shorts that came out of this contest produced!
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It wasn't in my trunks, but certainly in that region |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 8:58pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Oh jeez, Dave's gonna have a big head now. Good on ya, Winner! And good on ya, goodest runner up! ... So, now the March to May madness is out of the way we can look forward to the slightly less fraught and frenetic OWC. |
Thanks Libby. Just as an additional note my head was large at Birth. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 8:58pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
As one of the Red Shirts who died in the first round just to show that the tournament is serious, I’d like to congratulate both of you for getting past everything that Sean sent your way and turning in a couple excellent examples of screenwriting for an epic final.
And hawkeye, I don’t want to know where Dave was hiding that masterpiece... please don’t explain it. |
Thanks Frank. I pulled it out of my dot-dot..... |
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PKCardinal |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 10:03pm |
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LocationKansas Posts1501 Posts Per Day 0.58 |
Thanks again to everyone for their compliments.
Not sure what Dave has in mind for his tourney work... but, I'm hoping to get Blood Brothers and a severely re-written Unreliable Witness made. (Rewrites to begin soon.)
Have a couple of people locally that have seen the scripts and want to shoot them, but I'd love to get interest from outside my circle.
Anybody else wanna share which tourney scripts of theirs they'd like to see made? |
| PaulKWrites.com
Five Must Die - Low budget, contained horror thriller/Feature The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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RJP |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 10:07pm |
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Congrats to the finalists!
Good job, Dave. Well earned! |
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Warren |
Posted: May 10th, 2018, 10:40pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3890 Posts Per Day 1.23 |
Thanks again to everyone for their compliments.
Not sure what Dave has in mind for his tourney work... but, I'm hoping to get Blood Brothers and a severely re-written Unreliable Witness made. (Rewrites to begin soon.)
Have a couple of people locally that have seen the scripts and want to shoot them, but I'd love to get interest from outside my circle.
Anybody else wanna share which tourney scripts of theirs they'd like to see made? |
I’d love to see Blood Brothers made. It was one of, if not my favourite script of the tournament. I'll play though, I'd love to see The Painter, A Generous Donation, and Retired filmed. I think Retired was my strongest script, but it would cost a bit to make. |
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FrankM |
Posted: May 11th, 2018, 7:55am |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1446 Posts Per Day 0.56 |
I'd like to see my favorite submission of the tournament (okay, okay, my only submission) expanded into something a bit longer. Timmy is sitting in one of the Short SciFi and Fantasy Scripts threads right now. |
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ajr |
Posted: May 12th, 2018, 2:55pm |
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Congrats Dave, you did an amazing job this tournament and I enjoyed reading your stuff.
You too Paul, nice work, and like someone said before, if one person would have gone your way instead of the other way, Sean would be breaking a tie.
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 12th, 2018, 2:58pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Congrats Dave, you did an amazing job this tournament and I enjoyed reading your stuff.
You too Paul, nice work, and like someone said before, if one person would have gone your way instead of the other way, Sean would be breaking a tie.
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Thanks, mate - appreciate the congrats and all of your reads |
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Kirsten |
Posted: May 13th, 2018, 2:20pm |
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January Project Group Giving up is not an option....
LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Congrats to Dave and Paul and everyone else that entered... !!! |
| "Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....
'What we do in the Shadows.' |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 13th, 2018, 2:48pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
Congrats to Dave and Paul and everyone else that entered... !!! |
Thanks Kirsten |
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TheUsualSuspect |
Posted: May 16th, 2018, 3:55pm |
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No shame in getting kicked out of this tournament from the Runner Up. Congrats everyone. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: May 16th, 2018, 3:59pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.80 |
No shame in getting kicked out of this tournament from the Runner Up. Congrats everyone. |
Thanks, |
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