I’ve been locked up at work all day so just now getting a chance to comment.

Libby! Wow - congrats on your great entry!  Such a cool story and I loved where you got the idea. You just never know where inspiration may come from!

Loved all the entires - I did read all of them but work interference kept me from commenting on all. Another great OWC and another great learning exercise. Thx for the fun!

I really enjoyed your work. Congratulations.

I think it's awesome that a group of people dedicate their free time towards giving others constructive critcism for free. Big thank you to everyone for taking the time to read my pile of doodoo.

I'm a busy person but I'm trying to write more so I take these as personal challenges to motivate me. I'm going to work on second draft right now!

Congrats to L. Chambers for the win!

Hi all,

Thanks for your precious feedback! Every comment was constructive in its own way.

This was a fun OWC! I really enjoyed taking part in it, and look forward to other challenges.

Congrats to the winners, and thanks to everyone who organized this.

All the best,
Maroun

Thanks Kathy & Michael.

And thanks Dr Frank & Maroun.Tell all your writer friends about the OWCs, the more the merrier!

Congrats to Libby. Hoarder was my top pick, followed by Daughter.
I figured Libby and Chris wrote those scripts, but wasn't sure
of the order. Both scripts are sensational horror stories!
A big shout out to Kathy and her entry, which by the
way was my #3 choice. I loved the story telling aspect in You
Don't Know Jack. Great turn out overall and thank you Don and Zack.

Quoted from SAC Was that the episode that featured Zack?

Good stuff all around.  Not a single one in this batch I would call "bad" which is kind of rare.

I agree with the top spots, and enjoyed those quite a bit.  Props to those authors.

Underrated here IMO is Netflix and Chill.  Not sure everyone got what the author was going for in that blink-and-you'll-miss-it script.  Rework that one with a bit of clarity and a big screen television on the wall -- you'd have a very appealing script that's fairly easy to shoot.

'Twas away from my PC for a few days, but I caught the results through my phone; as suspected the best scripts garnered the top choices, especially ‘Hoarder’, which was a nice creepy ride that fit like a glove for this Halloween’s OWC. Awesome job Libby!

And of course, thanks Zack and Don for another cool challenge that keeps us writing. Till next time…

Thanks Bert, appreciated

Quoted from bert Underrated here IMO is Netflix and Chill.  Not sure everyone got what the author was going for in that blink-and-you'll-miss-it script.  Rework that one with a bit of clarity and a big screen television on the wall -- you'd have a very appealing script that's fairly easy to shoot.

100%. This is one of the most produceable of the lot, with a good premise to match, and it stuck in my mind for those reasons. Someone should make this.