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This was completely captivating. Your portrayal of Indian/Kashmiri culture gave the story an air of authenticity. The dialogue was realistic. The characters were deep and believable.
The romance between Adam and Shazana was realistically portrayed. Their feelings for each other jumped off the page just as it would jump from a screen.
I won’t comment on the ending to avoid giving anything away. I know what kind of reaction you were shooting for and, well, you got it out of me.
Thank you Don. That really works. Very much appreciated.
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Regarding the Trailer, I kinda think it works as more of an audio visual synopsis which could be quite useful when pitching or querying with the industry.
Hmmm, $20, might be worth giving it go.
Sorry, I hadn't had a to chance to look at the actual script but the trailer is interesting.
Colin I agree with you. I’ve actually been contacted by a production company called Dojohouse in LA to get this filmed. They love it. It’s too early to gauge what they’re offering but they are well keen to get this screenplay produced. Thanks for your feedback.
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John, as I said on another thread here, I think this is awesome. They have created an amazing marketing tool for you and sounds like you already have interest being shown. Wishing you the very best with this. I did post a couple of my scripts (still waiting for them to be posted on the site) and after seeing these trailers, and I will most likely pony up a couple $20s to have the trailers done. Again, great work here. Love the visuals they created.
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I’ve actually been contacted by a production company called Dojohouse in LA to get this filmed. They love it. It’s too early to gauge what they’re offering but they are well keen to get this screenplay produced. Thanks for your feedback.
My Screenplays Two Moons The Deadly Fruit Of Original Sin The Blue Room No Time For Love The Implosion Resistance The Pearl Earring The Bigger The Storm Before She Died
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