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Trauma Teddy (currently 2881 views) |
Fausto |
Posted: November 3rd, 2016, 2:58pm |
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LocationNew Jersey Posts193 Posts Per Day 0.06 |
Funny, funny, funny and smart writing. I love the short descriptions...great job! Fausto |
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Warren |
Posted: November 3rd, 2016, 3:29pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Thanks, fausto.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Kirsten |
Posted: November 4th, 2016, 8:35am |
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January Project Group Giving up is not an option....
LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Hi Warren, very cool, funny I liked it. 😊 |
| "Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....
'What we do in the Shadows.' |
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Warren |
Posted: November 4th, 2016, 2:31pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Thanks for reading, Kristen. |
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BSaunders |
Posted: November 7th, 2016, 6:01am |
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LocationGold Coast Posts272 Posts Per Day 0.09 |
Hahaha. I like it. I like it a lot.
But yeah, what MakeItZero said would defo make for a better pay off at the end. |
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Warren |
Posted: November 7th, 2016, 3:21pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Cheers for the read, Brandon.
It's getting some interest in it's current form so probably won't be changing anything until that falls through. |
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BSaunders |
Posted: November 7th, 2016, 6:34pm |
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LocationGold Coast Posts272 Posts Per Day 0.09 |
Cheers for the read, Brandon.
It's getting some interest in it's current form so probably won't be changing anything until that falls through. |
It would be a fun one to make, so I'm sure it'll get picked up. |
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Warren |
Posted: August 10th, 2018, 4:02pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Trauma Teddy has been optioned to be turned into a live action piece. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: August 10th, 2018, 4:50pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6875 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Trauma Teddy has been optioned to be turned into a live action piece. |
Very cool - can't wait to see it |
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Warren |
Posted: August 19th, 2018, 11:48pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Filmmaker decided not to use this so it is once again available. Shortest option ever. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: October 23rd, 2018, 3:52pm |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Sorry the option didn't work out
I liked it, short and punchy! Didn't twig what was going on until she picked up teddy
Very original and a welcome break from some other 'comedy' shorts I've read tonight |
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Two steps to writing a good screenplay: 1) Write a bad one 2) Fix it |
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Warren |
Posted: October 23rd, 2018, 4:14pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Thanks for checking this out, Matt.
I really love this script. It’s probably my personal favourite out of all the shorts I’ve written.
Let me know if you need something read. |
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Philostrate |
Posted: October 26th, 2018, 11:01am |
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Clever and funny, in a very dark way. I liked it.
This one was a difficult one to pull off, because of the topic, but you did a great job.
What a shame the option didn't work. |
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Warren |
Posted: October 26th, 2018, 3:35pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Thanks for the read, David.
I actually hung on to this story for quite a while because I was worried how it would be received. I'm glad readers have enjoyed it.
Is there anything you want read? |
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