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Mugged - WT (currently 3543 views)
Don
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 11:26am
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Mugged by 0 - Short, Comedy - Writing can be burdensome - pdf, format
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Steven
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 11:31am
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Gary in Houston
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 12:10pm
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Okay, I confess — I laughed. Especially at the ending. Good job here. And Steven’s right. Very meta. Best of luck, Gary
Some of my scripts: Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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eldave1
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 12:39pm
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Ah - the bane of our existence. Relevant for sure.
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JEStaats
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 1:37pm
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No sh*t, there I was....
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I don't git it. This is total fiction as a reel writer KNOWS that there werk rox! Heh heh. Luv'd it.
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HyperMatt
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 1:50pm
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Wasn't expecting that. Nice tongue in cheek story. Was quite funny, the 'goodest'. Made me laugh in places. This deserves to go a few rounds in the comp, if not win.
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MarkItZero
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 1:54pm
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That was epic.
That rug really tied the room together.
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Zombie Sean
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 2:06pm
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Got a laugh out of me! Loved it, especially the near end.
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jayrex
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 2:17pm
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This one was certainly inspired! Good job!
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PrussianMosby
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 2:20pm
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Mugged I liked the irony and the overall direction isn't bad, (good fourth wall breaking regarding the brevity of the very short the viewer is actually watching that moment… kind of). But a real out of this challenge form would have been doable, and actually, I believe, be much more entertaining, even justify a production perhaps. 3
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PKCardinal
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 3:42pm
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Captured me perfectly. Well done.
PaulKWrites.comFive Must Die - Low budget, contained horror thriller/FeatureThe Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/FeatureWait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror
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ScottM
Posted: April 2nd, 2018, 6:06pm
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Very good. I laughed just thinking about you guys.
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Warren
Posted: April 3rd, 2018, 3:01am
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That damn mug, one-day it will be mine!!! Well written and a fun little story. I'm 99.9% sure I know who wrote this. Well done.
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Stumpzian
Posted: April 3rd, 2018, 12:29pm
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I didn't really want to like this because it uses an old device writers fall back on when they can't think of what write about. That is, write about not having anything to write about. But, you turned it around for me. And everyone here can relate.
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SAC
Posted: April 3rd, 2018, 7:22pm
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Very good! Haha. Reminds me of me lately. I’ve read three or four of these so far, and not a lousy one in the bunch. Good job, writer. Steve
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