Quoted from CameronD Kapla.

Mirab, his sails unfurled.

I kind of knew where this was going after you gave the age of the captain. It's a cute story, child's imagination and all. Not sure if it's the equal of some of the others I've read but it's certainly very solidly written.

Nicely written story. Am I the only one wondering what is actually on film for the first part of this? A close-up of the model starship? What of the crew? Is Jack doing all the voices?

Sorry to be dim, or blonde, or whatever...

It's a lovely inventive tale and once the campground comes into the forefront I get the trick, but I'm still left wondering how to Produce this based on your written blueprint.

Quoted from LC Nicely written story. Am I the only one wondering what is actually on film for the first part of this? A close-up of the model starship? What of the crew? Is Jack doing all the voices? Sorry to be dim, or blonde, or whatever... It's a lovely inventive tale and once the campground comes into the forefront I get the trick, but I'm still left wondering how to Produce this based on your written blueprint.

I pictured it as an actual starship bridge set at first (and thought the captain's age was a typo), not entirely unlike the Spaceman Spiff skits in Calvin and Hobbes.

It wouldn't have to be a replica of "real" Star Trek set, but something like what a kid would envision.

It was ok.  I wasn't as sold as some others were.

Dan

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Very cute. Thought there was something odd about an eight year old starship captain. Good work!

Steve