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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    September '23 OWC  ›  Sympathy for the Devil - OWC Moderators: Arundel
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Posted: September 15th, 2023, 11:51am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


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Liked this one. Could have been a little more. A little over the top, imo, would have worked nicely here. It was already pretty crazy so why not? Anyway, I wasn’t a fan of the ending with the song itself playing and Satan lip syncing. I definitely think you could have been a bit more original here, and that’s what holds this one back.

Steve


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Only so-so for me. The writing was fine, the setup okay, while the song choice
great. Something about the story didn't jive for me. I guess the story felt
like it was covering old ground and not going any further. Didn't care for the
ending, but that's me.
I've never been big on stories, especially black comedies, involving Satan. I'll
just say the writing style was a plus.
Congrats on taking part.
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